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Finally found some decent references for running, so I thought to give it another shot. Still jittery but... I hope it's an improvement from my last two.
I don't know if I'll finish this... I may and I may not... We'll see. I've no patience for animation but sometimes it's fun to do it just to get a nice handle on anatomy and movement. 
Yep.
I don't like the tail or how scribbly parts are but oh well... I had some HUGE issues with the back feet and legs even with reference. For some reason they didn't want to be 'right' so sorry if they look odd. I'm too tired to care enough to fix/clean them up right now, haha!

It is a looped animation though, about 13 frames I believe. I may add a few more to make it smoother if I ever get a chance to finish it, and I think I may actually line, colour, and shade it as well. Again, we'll see.
For now toward the end/beginning the body just kind of 'slides' back to the other side of the frame... Oh dear :I  
Must fix that, it's bothering me now. 


Critiques are alright IF they'll actually help. Please do not just tell me what's wrong, tell me how to fix it as well.

UPDATE: Thank you thank you thank you for the critiques! O____O They are really helping me see areas I need to work and adjust such as the tail and the spinal area/rump. This is pretty rough and I think for the next update I'll include a three piece .gif of the matchstick figure, this sketching phase, and then the detailed sketch. 
Also, I am still looking up the reference(s) I used for this. Bear with me. I was at work on a pretty hard job site today and it was raining and cold, so I'm tired and I really don't feel like sifting through images right now. 
It's probably pretty easy to find anyway. 
Either way, I'll look it up a bit later. No worries, I have no shame in admitting I referenced the heck out of this. I WANT to get a better handle on movement! :I 
Hopefully I will... eventually....
So again, thank you for the crits and pointers :3 I really appreciate them! :D


EDIT: Putting in scraps for now. 



{Paint Tool SAI}
+_enjoy_+
Don't Use please.
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:icondragonqeen1010:
dragonqeen1010 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
This is perfect!
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DikkeBobby Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
It looks pretty good, there are some little things that good be better.... -.- I would like to explain, but I just can't in english, but it still looks good^^ 
Are you going to leave it like this or do you already know if you are going to finish this? :D because it is pretty nice
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NinjaKato Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
I have to add some frames and adjust the settings a bit but for now it'll stay as is ^^; I've not going the time or patience for animation but doing it helps rest the senses and get a feel for movement :) 
You're welcome to critique it as best you can if you'd like, any help is welcome :) Thank you!
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Rafeku Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It looks preety fluid here. very well done this one. Fav'd
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Animelover121767 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
Wow
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LolWriter Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
Wow ^^
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Kat-Nicholson Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
Might it have been this? kat-nicholson.deviantart.com/a… - I know it's an old tutorial, and there are massive problems with the motion's fluidity… if you did use it you surely improved on it massively! /:]
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NinjaKato Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Nah, it was photos :3 
I'm still trying to find the slides :I
It should be easier to find them -_-;;; 
:XD: 

That's a neat tutorial regardless :D
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Kat-Nicholson Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
thanks! but it's not as good as Ur animation! Might the photos have been by Edward Muybridge ? he used to do a lot of sequential shoots like that? :) 
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pkmnkat3 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I looked at the previous years' gif, and it's fantastic how much you've improved. I'm not that great at animation, so I won't critique, but I do love the result! Good work, please keep posting your lovely art :la:
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